by Saula88
I have been following your work. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. I can almost touch and feel the, all very believable characters, who have average dicks, saggy tits, flabs, Caesarean cuts, and the lovely Cornwall countryside. I once stayed in Cornwall in a magical place very similar to what you have described so well in this story.
I read this story with my wife. She is now thinking of how to share it with our son, accidentally on purpose. You have started something here.
I see some feedback from other readers in your other stories, on your conversation-style writing. I personally like and enjoy this “clean” direct style. Somewhat unorthodox, but you have made it work. Do continue with this style. Look forward to your new stories.
I had to laugh at this story, you never have to worry about kids reading your story they would never understand all the big words you use and I don't think that many adults now days would understand them either, however, I think it was a great story. I gave you 5 stars
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. My wife and I live in the English South Coast, we
can really relate to the outdoor scenes described. Do the write thing, looking
forward to more...
I was hoping for a continuation of this erotic tale where maybe Julian wants more details and maybe join in the photo shoots. Great story!!
I read this story with my hubby who is a photography buff. He said why not try this on our son who was visiting us bec he often used our PC for this & that when he visited us, when what he wanted to do was impractical on his small cellphone screen.
Long story short, we left the PC in his bedroom for his “convenient use”, & set things up so that he will get to our pix folder by a naughty trail of little clues.
Our son took the bait. My hubby & I could sense he looked at me differently after that. Then, him being a photography buff too, we asked him to take some artistic intimate nude shots for us, but no sex. Again Shaula, we were inspired by your other sexy story “He Takes Pix For Parents”, another erotic classic, but we were not brave enough to go as far as your hot story.
It was really erotic when the 3 of us reviewed the shots together. Our son is very skilled in photoediting software. It was really hot when we had him pretty up photoedit some closeup intimate shots of my pussy. He could render my pussy clean shaven or in varying degrees of hairiness. He could also make my outers & inners more or less vivid. This is soooo sexy.
Shaula, cant thank you enough for your wicked inspirations. Thanks for being literally a part of our lives. My insatiable hubby is already planning our son’s next visit. We will continue to await your new stories for further inspiration, esp your photography themed ones.
Thoroughly enjoyed this well-written classy tender taboo story. The mom-son intimacy is nicely paced & built up to fruition. A nice change from the formulaic heavy action stories on this site. I will be reading all the other stories in the collection. I know I will enjoy them all. 5 stars.
A well-written teasing erotic mom-son intimacy story. Sensitive, tender, languid mood, good characterization. 5 stars.
One of the hottest stuff ever read ....kudos to author.....ask her for illustrated ones....shes nailed it completely......
Very sexy and arousing and takes me back to my first time with my son..........
Absolutely outstanding and lovingly written. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.
A real treasure.
Hugs and kisses
Sybille