by withinreason
If there was anything wrong with the grammar in that story you could not prove it by me . *5* stars hot from me. Thanks for writing!
Great little tale. Sounded just real enough to make it plausible.......more for sure! 5 stars!
I liked the story so far. Part 2, I hope is coming with sister too.
superb, now waiting forthe thresome mom+son+dau... ?Quite a bunch of erotic possibilities..
Excellent story. Would like more. Subplots have been presented. I hope the author develops them.
Awesome story you need to continue with more. It's been awhile since you wrote this please add more with daughter and son!!!!!!!!!!