All Comments on 'Mum's Portrait'

It make me cum-more please!

Wasn't too quick, wasn't too short. Plus my experience show this is very possible. Enough said. Good job.

This is a really good story. Keep up the good work.

Story is good! Could have been better with more descriptive details!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

and live happily ever after

A great story, glad I found it. Hat tip to rightbank whose comment showed up in the 'recent comments' pane that led me here.

For two pages it does it's job well, personally I would've liked it if the build up was longer but this was good.