All Comments on 'Murder on Sixth Street'

Happy retirement!

5

He did what he wanted to and got the reward but was it justice? Not in the eyes of the law but who cares? At least he was retiring and no more calls like that to be made. 5⛤👍

Fantastic!! Very entertaining story!! Have never read any of you’d but I’ll try some others now!!

Great plot, with interesting characters, and internal and external dialogue. Lots of detailed information with logical thinking and information searching. The sex scene seemed authentic and enjoyable for both of them

You're a good storyteller, which makes for a good read.

Well constructed, good characters and just a feel good story. All stories don't have to be about ideal people. Ordinary people doing what is good for them without hurting others is good to read about and I enjoyed this. 5*

You’re starting to grow on me. I even like your sci-fi stuff. And I don’t ever like sci-fi stuff.

More Logs of the Julay, please.

You do the detective stories so well. This utterly believable yarn is in the Raymond Chandler

ouvre, while the dialogue is worthy of Dashiel Hammett. Each used a staccato form of sentence structure. Your's is a more "over-easy" style. I liked the redemptive conclusion. It is much more palatable than the vengence and retribution that often permeates. the grnre. Could only give you the max, as Literotica powers-that-be think that's enough of a distinction for what is, after all,

a suck/fuck site.

My second time reading this and it was even better! Just flat good writing! 5*