All Comments on 'Muriel's Wedding'

I was not not fond it because it indicates date rape drugs and blackmail.

Good story. I had read the other one first so I was hoping her submissiveness would be played up more. Jon is a bastard, but a well hung one! Interested in how her daughter reacts.

Not only is she past her prime, yet a married, cheating whore while her husband is away, but she's a gang-bang slut, with her own family? And she even ruins her daughter's wedding, to boot. I guess they all despise and have no more respect for the husband than this miserable gutter slut does, but she has even less respect for herself. Truly deplorable, start to finish.

0 stars because it's not an incest story. Miscategorized. Pseudoincest stories kind of work if the familial relationship established, but in laws is pushing it too far. If anything this should have been in Nonconsent.

I'd agree with regard to the 'miscategorising'. This was never intended, nor indeed submitted as an incest story; unfortunately, it seems that the powers-that-be rather than the author are the arbiters on that score.

Wowwww, that was incredibly well written! Not so much character development but everything else was amazingly well done! Kudos! 5 star stuff...