by Antidarius
Thank you for posting more of this story. It's hooked me in further since the first chapter, and I can't wait for more.
Author, you have a wonderful way with stories, and this is a beautiful one. Thank You.
Hey AD,
This is great stuff! For the love of all that’s sacred, keep going!! I’ve been waiting (jonesing) for THIS chapter since the instant I finished the first one.
[Okay, okay…okay. Breathe! Just gotta pace myself. Be cool. Nothing addictive about MY behavior - oh hellll no. Say nice things to the author and sign your addicted ass off.]
Love your pacing, the vehicle in and the premise of the story, and am really (REALLY REALLY) looking forward to more of your writing.
Keep up the good work!
Mel
Good story, liked the psychic adaption. Maybe they are drawn to make group collective/ harem. Don't like them eating like that in public when they are supposed to super smart - red flag, filler about his online job or random African- American stereotype thrown in. They should be studying finance, science and engineering to get rich and create crazy inventions like clean energy and space travel, maybe the mushrooms are alien tech'. Hopefully part 3 is less than 1.5 years away. ; ) Thanks
Really enjoy this story and would have liked to join on patreon, but the lowest available tier is 4,50 $, which is a bit steep i think. :(
A great yarn
I read a helluva lot and I'm really enjoying this.
MORE please.
Great start to what looks to be a really nice series. I'm hoping you will keep the fans appetites stoked soon! It sounded like he was going to be pounding both Iris and Becca right away, possibly at the same time. Keep up the good work!
I have really enjoyed reading this story. You have me visualizing this in my mind. I hope to see an update soon!
What a place to end it. I hope another chapter is added soon. This story is amazing, thank you Antidarius!
So far this is a really good story. Please continue! It’s well written, too, but here’s
a brief grammar lesson: “between, to, for, etc., her and me”; “she and I saw, went, felt, etc.
Great story, love the characters and how the story develops. Please post the next chapter(s) soon!
Good start, absorbed me in the 1st half of Ch 1. Strongly developing the characters; was interested in them by end of chapter 1.
Look forward to more.
This tale has such good characters it would be a crime to leave them unfulfilled. Definitely needs to be continued to a conclusion. The beauty of this story so far is that it could end anywhere. Tragedy, emotional disasters, world changing scientific breakthroughs, romantic bliss, a harem or all of these are possible outcomes. A fantastic scenario. It needs a tidying up of the loose pieces.
Who has the film rights?