All Comments on 'Muslim Girl's Wardrobe Disaster'

story shows promise. could do with a little more descriptions. feels a bit rushed.

Great idea. Almost like a slapstick comedy. One caveat, devout Muslims actually shave their body hair. Amira would definitely be smooth and bare, not hairy.

Thank you @wardpike! I appreciate the feedback, and I did not know that fact. Will keep it in mind for future stories!

Will we see a part 2?

Nice story, excited for part 2.

Thank you "rrdplznotake" and others for the feedback. This was originally a 3 part story, but this version was all 3 parts combined. So Amira will unlikely get a direct sequel, but I'll see in the future.

this story is also available on chyoa where authors can change the story and move it in a different direction, unfortunately it has a bunch of unfinished work if someone wants to complete something or create an entirely new thing from this premise start to end, check it out

Hi thank you to the last anonymous commenter. Yes I also posted this on chyoa when it was first written. I have very much enjoyed all the new stories that others have added to the general premise. I also welcome any additions to my chyoa version:

https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.622686