All Comments on 'Mustang Romance Ch. 02'

Colorful way of character development. Lots of plot potential. Good idea not to go overboard with a Texas accent. Hard to keep an audience with the time between chapters but you're making worth the wait.

but she's got to be a little naive to be putting up with Levi's moves and Luke's posturing. Most women would be annoyed at being fought over like a piece of meat. She's just sitting there and accepting it. That doesn't ring true for me. Looking forward to more, though!