All Comments on 'Mustang Sally'

Thank you

North

it a 5 because I'm sure the story is hot!!

Beautifully and erotically written.

You are such a gifted storyteller. Wonderful writing! Thank you Sir.

Pleasant little rewrite thats been often done better

Extremely well written, wonderfully sensual, flows like the waves on her lake.

Beautiful writing, blending erotic and pastoral themes brilliantly.

Knowing where the story was going was an advantage as you could just let the words and the passions carry you along.

Loved the image of a small green sward in all that urban sprawl - like a green lung.

Best of luck!

"Men were disappearing in West Delosboro." What a line, you hooked me from there! Well done, Softie!

A beautiful story, lush and sensual and coming down with satisfying bang at the end. I especially appreciate the way the nature metaphors and images were interwoven throughout, connecting the world outside with the mysteries within. This is the kind of story the Earth Day Contest was designed to ellicit.

What a stunning and sumptuous tale. It was simply delicious. I don't know who was luckier, the predator or the prey. Best of luck in the contest. -S.

Excellent writing! I was carried away by your story. It was such a great journey, thanks. Bravo!

Magical and beautiful!

Great story, great story line....seems everyone feels the same!

~Honey

A vivid tale that is at once magical, mysterious and ethereal. A fine journey within pure sensual essence. Loved it!

Great writing and a great story line.

I'm glad to have read this story.

Keep the submissions coming, I will look forward to reading them.

What a movingly beautiful story.It filled me with a sense of longing for something ephemeral.

A super story, one that perfectly conjures up the mystery.

Exceedingly well-written and a pleasure to read.

Mustang Sally is what every man wants -- eternal beauty, everlasting sex! She's fabulous and the story is great. Loved the ending.

A great story!! I love the end- how could it be any other way?

Thank you for this beautiful story, it took me to a faraway place with a wonderful person from a fading too fast memory from better days