All Comments on 'Mutual Benefits Ch. 02'

I'm really liking this story. Please keep it up

Please continue

I look forward to the next chapter

More...please!

Awesome story..... probably true..... or at least close to true!!! Keep it up and don't be long with the next chapter(s)..... really a great story......

Very well written, I’m excited to get to read more!

First two instalments excellent!

Too much story, no sex,

Please, keep going!

Love the slow build up...more please!

Soooo CEREBRAL!!!

Suggestion: "Don't Think...Feel...!"

hope to read next chapter soon.

Slow burn with formulaic characters but you bring them out so well... Just a pleasure to see their evolution. It's just getting hot. The mother is a stereotype. So is he, really, being too shy to even talk to her at first?? But great still.

You are talented! This story must continue for a long time. It's quite rare to find such a good description of the characters' feelings in a simple manner.

You ought to make it into a real book lasting 300 pages, at least for the first one.

Thanks!

Good storyline, well written, easy to read, excellent character building. Maybe a bit slow-paced, but even that builds tension and keeps me hooked. Amazing story. Thank you.

What a great story—so honest, real and sweet. This is a fantastic series and I’m so glad there’s more. The way Quinn stood up for Crystal showed his true depth of character; and the way he handled—and will handle—Taylor’s selfie underscores this even further. Great insights! Str8As

Oooohhhhh, no...this is NOT BORING...the anticipation of what is coming is 😋 delicious, I look forward to reading what Quinn and Taylor are gonna get into!!

Stereotypes...ha, ha, ha!! So funny...just adds to the storyline...I am so tired of the "political correctness" of the "modern world"...nice to have something REAL to read, and no judgments!

Now, on to Chapter 3, WOO, HOO!! TEEN SEX, COMING UP!!!!

I love it. I love your art. I love it so much

Surprised he's not gay, that would explain most of the story.

He's upset with the nudes being circulated yet never asked Taylor if he could wank to her mental image? That's just hypocrisy man.

... is baloney.

After all, this is litEROTICA.

And the idea that Quinn should ask Taylor for permission to "wank to her mental image" -- we!!, that's just laughable

["Hey, Taylor, would it be OK

if I wank to your mental image? "] !!!!

Still intriguing, even without the expected sex

(which I'm still expecting).

Paul in Oklahoma

Yeah, I’m out! I don’t need socio-political commentary in my erotica.

Sticking with it for now.

Meh I'm out. Was kind of hoping Taylor was more reserved but it seems like her and her clique are just the stereotypical sluts. I'll pass on that. Who wants the jocks' sloppy seconds?

Out standing story sets stage for many more waiting to read. Great job