All Comments on 'Mutual Benefits Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Much better, really getting somewhere now. Keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can these chapters come sooner than once a month? I check you page daily. Great job!

BloodangelzBloodangelzover 2 years ago

Love it and how Quinn’s ball finally dropped in both getting Morgan and standing up to Taylor. Will be anxious for another week to read on

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Your stories are written so well, it's a breath of fresh air for this site. I almost never read the multi chapter stories since they lose their sense of tension and desire, but I'm absolutely on board with you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fantastic story so far, can’t wait to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

10 chapters, no actual sex but it keeps getting better and better

whacky76whacky76over 2 years ago

You are killing me. I need closure, this is great but it's 1am and have been reading all day. Please give a reader a climax to your story. Love it so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great read and well written. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story. Very slow burn, but great build-up. Keep up the good work. Just a hint: Try to keep the chapters coming on regular basis, or it will lose momentum.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

amazing!!! can’t wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great! Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

i need the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Horseman68Horseman68over 2 years ago
More.

Story is like eating potato chips.

Canadianguy875Canadianguy875over 2 years ago

Can't wait for the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

this is so good

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love this. Taking the time to build makes the sex that is ubdoubtably coming that much more rewarding. Personally hoping Quinn doesnt choose to give his virginity to Taylor. He just has too much chemistry with Morgan. I also love the way youve managed to make a character so unlikeable throught the first few chapters and transform her into a favorite.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice work!

MADDOGINTEXASMADDOGINTEXASover 2 years ago

Yup, Quinn & Morgan, together, so sweet...

How does Taylor fit into this...?m. Will have to wait & see.

The whole dynamic is almost PAINFUL to read, it is Sssooo good!

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanabout 2 years ago

still Taylor is a mixed up girl. just looking for a real BF or relationship but engaging in cheap sex to be popular. Sad life.

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Just your average young man who thinks he can make himself into a writer. I'm interested in making longer stories where the sex is a part of the story.

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