by BashfulScribe
I dropped into this segment first, but it didn’t take long to catch up pretty well.
I like your style and pacing. Your editor does an excellent job, no distractions.
You have a excellent grasp on human emotions and interactions.
5*
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Taylor always messing with Quinn’s pleasure but boy I can’t wait. Love the story and keep them coming. If we don’t get another this year, have a good New Years ( but I want more sooner rather then later)
This is top shelf erotic soap romance. Loving it.
Your dialogue is spot on.
Looking forward to rest of the story.
The pace in the story is getting better. I still find it hard to sympathise with Quinn. He's not my kind of character. All the self-pitying is annoying, while everybody cares about him. Awkward en weird. I wonder where this goes, though. He could even turn out to become a cuck. Who knows.
Excellent story so far. Like a good book I couldn't stop reading. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
I really hate having to wait for the next installment! Awesome story so far!
Fantastic story. Very well balanced of storyline and eroticism.
Hopefully the next chapter will be soon.
Thats the best erotic story I've ever heard. Really gentle and subtle "not going straight to the buisness" plot that really stimulates imagination. Characters are believable and intelligent and they relations are healthy and realistic. Cant wait for the rest. Keep up the good work!
Thats the best erotic story I've ever heard. Really gentle and subtle "not going straight to the buisness" plot that really stimulates imagination. Characters are believable and intelligent and they relations are healthy and realistic. Cant wait for the rest. Keep up the good work!
I'm coming back everyday just to check for the next part. Drop it asap my man