All Comments on 'Mutual Benefits Ch. 15'

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Blunote39Blunote39about 2 years ago

"It's a trap!" - Admiral Ackbar

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Okay he's definitely gonna build a harem. Lmao.

arrowglassarrowglassabout 2 years ago
Always a twist!

Love the way you keep us guessing!!!

mtil74mtil74about 2 years ago

Im hooked! Cant wait 4 the next part!!

iam_william_willabout 2 years ago

the month wait between chapters is killing me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It’s nice to find a story that’s more than just erotica.

The wait gets a bit long, but the results are worth it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Sure, the guy that can't think straight for a second, that starts crying over everything and only has awkward conversations, starts a harem.

AnnyomyAnnyomyabout 2 years ago

Loving the build-up, and love all the small details!

Fexif101Fexif101about 2 years ago

Started this series for taylor and quinn relationship. Got hooked to this series for taylor and quinn relationship. Hated this series for morgan and quinn lovie dovie relationship. Excited for this series for a harem. You're one hell of a writer. If there is gonna be a harem, I'm all down for it. Tbh I think you're the only one who can provide the best possible harem close to reality.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It is strange how it went around to this partial open relationship, but I’m still thoroughly enjoying this and enjoy how honest and open Quinn and Morgan are with each other. Talking through things always makes me feel better anyway.

Also, what did his mom say in Chinese? I tried looking it up in google, and I was told it was Czech for “measuring tape”, which seems wrong

BashfulScribeBashfulScribeabout 2 years agoAuthor

"Guǐzi" is a xenophobic term for a foreigner and a měiguó guǐzi is specifically an American one. She's basically saying, "don't be such a <slur>."

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow, you took it through the uncomfortable slapping scene shock and turned it around in a meaningful way, bravo. This story continues to be fantastic, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I know the story is over, but things always going "right" for Quinn bothers me.

Also the whole "People are mean and I didn't notice because I'm too perfect to realize" trope is kinda...

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Just your average young man who thinks he can make himself into a writer. I'm interested in making longer stories where the sex is a part of the story.

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