All Comments on 'My Accident Ch. 02'

any normal guy no matter how inexperienced would be more than wiling to ask his mother to make him cum

she is just toying with him and doesn't really care about him other wise she would help him come to and not just get herself off

I've read all 3 stories and the poor boy needs some pussy & asshole . Finish the story with the poor lad getting both his mom and sisters pussy and buttholes

I have to say great work love to read more of this story.

typos much!!!!!!!

read a much better version off this type off story on here this was a let down you claim this was "real" but sounds so unrealistic and very unbelieveable. Im guessing english is not your first language or your a 14 yo but best to get a spell check and not talk to the readers as if their stupid ive seen this story wrote better with a long build up and it was pretty amazing. Sorry to seem harsh but seen that u want comments and votes that ur not getting so maybe if u take on board some negitive criticism it may help improve... try reading other stories off similar style and good luck in the future maybe ill be back with all good comments :)

I, like other readers, noticed the typos and improper grammar. You should enlist the help of a proof reader and a spell checker. It was a good story but the misspelled words and bad grammar took away from getting the full impact of an otherwise good story.

I got what, he was tring to say! He must be getting excited, while he typs this out. I know I got BONNER WHILE READING IT. so Love stop with bad remarks. wdenny

she seems to wild to be aa true story. you are a liar

Or maybe your just jealous^

It was pretty hot...but I kept getting distracted by numerous grammatical errors where I had to guess the word or phrase you were actually trying to say...proof reading before publishing would make this so much better/hotter...but all in all...pretty good.

I used to smell my mom's worn panties and get so hard. I couldn't believe how sexy her pussy smelled. I would get embarrassed when I knew she could see me with an erection. I think it really intrigued her to know that I was getting hard.