by RedHairedandFriendly
As always Red you have depicted an erotic and sensual night. You understand romance, sensuality and desire. You manage to paint a picture of passion and patience along with love and lust...always the way to approach the new...kudos my friend.
A sensual, erotic story of a wonderful, desired, shared experience. Well woven tale and a thoroughly enjoyable read.
I want to write erotica like you do - great quality and totaly loving and sensual. Great work - keep going
If you are a fan of anal you might know all of this but for those who don't this tells it all!
DC:
I'm not ordinarily into anal but you sure did make it interesting and erotic. Thank You. Ronnie W.
Red, this was a very effective telling of a lusty experience; but more, it was romantic, and it was incredibly hot to read about! Well, done, sweetie!
Excellent job, as always! Me thinks me needs to run get my toy out!
This story was so hot ! It was also so touching. I used to be one of those girls who swore they'd never try anal but I recently tried it with my bisexual boyfriend. I dont regret it. At all. We both read this story and loved it. Thanks !!!
Fantastic, descriptive, emotional storytelling. You succeed in portraying love and intimacy where so many others would stray (perhaps intentionally) towards crudity. Loved it!
Wow, a very sensitive, but erotic story. Good for men and women, and also (potentially) a great story to provide to your partner if you are unconvinced/unsure about trying anal. I'm very impressed.
gays suck, this story was fucked up and idk how i found it and why i fucking read it u sick fuck
Very sweet and affectionate, the way intimate adventures should be. More!
...her determination, setting the scene, all of it
always such a treat to have a gf that's into butt play, booty pirating...
5 stars
Very hot and yet so intimate and full of love and trust. I actually feel like trying anal sex now ;-)