by UltimateSin
Excellent story. The only thing that threw me a bit was that he'd gotten a used car after getting his license, but later he was walking, getting picked up/ dropped off, and borrowing one. Nothing said of it breaking down so I guess you forgot he had one.
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Good story, but what happened to the used car Cassandra bought for him? Later he doesn’t have a car. However, with the life he was leading, who needs a car!
Overall, very well written. I would have given it five stars; however, you wrote a Male POV throughout... until the epilogue. I'm curious as to why the author chose to switch POV's rather than continuing the story from the male perspective after investing the audience? It was a surprise and felt awkward.
Curious to see how it's going when he's in his forties and she's in her sixties.
And as the Sun slowly sinks into the West…. Who says erotica doesn’t end with romantic sentences, hell even a couple of paragraphs. Well written, superb transitioning and again, outfreakingstanding (yep, a long squiggly red line under that 🤷♂️)
line finish. 5⭐️
What a lovely romance. The characters felt realistic and like people you'd actually meet and like. 5*
Excellent, recommended
There was a small oddity about predestination, surety, about Nancy and our hero, but if they pair-bond (which is presented), and work at loving each other and staying in tune with each other, only one lover in a lifetime is fine for either partner.
Our hero was certainly well-trained to pay attention to women, and appreciate mature women, in his upbringing... that context may be why I wondered if another category might leak in....
Five for you
This was a nice, but not great story. The characters had depth, but they weren't developed up to the standard you used in some of your other stories, and the ending was very predictable. So little was made of the age gap, I think the story may have been more appropriate to 'romance' than mature. Still, an easy read with an 'Awwww' ending.
Very touching, so sexy, and their long learning relationship makes me envious.
That was an incredibly sexy a d loving story. I love happy endings as we!!. Great job!!