All Comments on 'My Badly Kept Secret'

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shagalotshagalotover 14 years ago
FINISHED!!!!!!

I hope this is just the start , what a vivid imagination you have , one of the better mom n son stories on here , well done , please hurry with following chapters

floaturboatfloaturboatover 14 years ago
The usual...but

The usual from Gentlemom is always outstanding. I can't help it I am a fan of everything Gentlemom writes. I have not been disappointed yet. This hot story is exceptionally well written and damned hot. Gentlemom I am so glad you posted this, I love your wicked imagination.

imharmless69imharmless69over 14 years ago
Fantastic

Another hot, memorable story from hands-down the best writer on Literotica.

Ducky7Ducky7over 14 years ago
Nailed it. Oh I mean she got nailed

Can't wait to hear the DP version. Good story THX

kathy2b46kathy2b46over 14 years ago
great

i loved it , so real and believable, i have to read all of gentlemom's other stories, if they are as good i will be wore out,lol

SamScribbleSamScribbleover 14 years ago
Top writing!

What more can I say?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Nice work

Good storytelling, excellent writing skills. A minor point: I urge avoiding references to puns (like "no pun intended") because they say, "look at how clever/funny/astute/creative I am."

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
"fuck, yeah, mom, I wanna fuck you tonight!"

This is a special story of motherfucking by a wonderful author, as only mothers, it seems, can write. Here husband Sam guides his wife along to what he knows she's eager to do with her boy Bobby. "Lots of mothers want to get fucked by their son," he tells her. "And many, many sons want to fuck their mother." Truer words were never spoken! Sam knows that a mother is very often excited by what her boy's got jumping in his pants, just as her son gets hard every time he thinks of his mother's cunt. Bobby is a big strong good-looking lad, so it's only natural that his mom's cunt starts leaking whenever she thinks of him naked, climbing on top of her and pressing his young dick up between her legs. Mom finally levels with her boy, tells him she needs him to fuck the shit out of her, and, as any son would, Bobby grins and says he's ready and very able to shove his big teenage prick right up her twat. Bobby unloads his big balls up where his mother--and dad--want him to shoot his rich creamy sperm. The first, but not the last, time the boy creams his own birth canal!

shygirl09shygirl09over 14 years ago
Sexy

I loved this story. I quickly added the author to my favorites. Cannot wait for another story. I just love how the son knew how to take control. Such a turn on to be taken that way.

GDesmondGDesmondover 14 years ago
Deliciously Decadent

It has only been recently that I discovered Gentlemom and her deliciously decadent stories. Though each is a delicious treat, this latest story surpasses anything I might have imagined. Thank you Gentlemom for expressing so well the thoughts and desires of so many of us. My husband is absolutely clueless, and my son and I want to keep it that way. What a wonderful, wet read. Gayle

garyr19680garyr19680over 14 years ago
Very erotic, and sexy

I love the story, I love the slow build up, then the faster paced scene in bed at the end. Another great story by gentlemom. Thanks for sharing it.

LaureenMcLLaureenMcLover 13 years ago
Oh dear lord

I LOVE this story!

L

jazzedly_Jazzedjazzedly_Jazzedabout 13 years ago
Wow. Great sexy writing!

This line is fabulous. Made me smile. You have a knack. Great job.

You wrote: "I had to start trimming my fingernails more closely. My pussy was getting sore." Damn - that is good. Love it!!! Peace baby!

Many FeathersMany Feathersabout 13 years ago
I will definitely be looking for more of this one.

Was a very sensual, sexy and entertaining read. I'll be looking for more along this line, and now anxious to read the rest of your stories.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
Fantastic story

This story seemed so real to me, or maybe I just wanted it to be real. With the mature sexy mom finally became sexually attached to her son, and they had an on-going sexual love affair with each other.

The movements of their everyday life, after having made love with each other, must have taken on a more sexual feel between them.

More like lovers touching when ever they were around each other, or maybe like a husband and wife would interact with each other.

I would love to read about how Sam brought about the three some that he is fantasizing about. That would be so hot to read.

Thanks for the good read

jhen46322jhen46322about 12 years ago
Gentlemom

Gentlemom is the best incest writer on literotica. bar none. My only wish is that she was my horny mother. lol

mgchnds2mgchnds2over 10 years ago
SUCH a

sensual , well written story ! LUVED it ! Would very much enjoy getting to know you. Ed

Sex4LfSex4Lfabout 10 years ago

Great story!! Wish you had the comments section turned on with all your stories. Love reading your stuff.

NobleGent45NobleGent45over 4 years ago
Guess Who

Your stories, my lady, NEVER cease to amaze me and get me off. I'll write

M

shymaleashymaleaalmost 2 years ago

very naughty sexy story and it,s the same when it started with us,my wife and son,2years ago,our son&his friends were sitting in our garden and we heard what he &friends thought about my wife,very beautifull,nice legs&tits and my son said also that he licked&kissed her panties she put in the dirty wash,from then on she started to wear only miniskirts,high heels or wedges,mostly no bra and stockings was a must,she teased&flirted with me and them,let me feel her ass when he&friends could see,sometimes i gave her a spanking when they could hear it,fantastic time

grandmasboy1985grandmasboy1985over 1 year ago

Great story. Very easy to read and descriptive. Erotic, taboo, sensual and kinky. 5 stars :) Thank you.

grandmasboy1985grandmasboy1985over 1 year ago

Great story! Taboo, kinky, sensual, erotic. Easy to read and get lost in. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

It would be really nice if you would finish the rest of the story.

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