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All Comments on 'My Ballantyne Ch. 01'

by Egmont Grigor

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asiaprofasiaprofover 17 years ago
Nice one...

Looking forward to reading Part 2

J-NiteJ-Niteover 16 years ago
Too distracting

There were too many words that were mispelled and out of place to really focus on the story. Get an editor!

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