All Comments on 'My Beach Boy'

That was one really great example of a really poorly written bad story.

1) I thought Alynn was the female until that got clarified.

2) When did the masseur (Made ... what a strange name) get naked so his cock tip could penetrate her?

Writing mechanics are terrible. Most homonym choices were wrong, grammar is off, (oh, yeah...'off' is 'of'). Add bad flow and it becomes awkward / uncomfortable to read. Made a Balinese Beach Boy happy! (Pun intended!)

3* (but might vote 2 - if I could stand re-reading it!)

So I only rated it 3***s.

Stimulating stories like My Beach Boy are all very plausible; just ask any hedonist. An erotic massage delivered by a talented masseur can arouse the sexual expectations of everyone present. As a certified massage therapist, I've given sensuous massages to hundreds of clients, assuring me of good recommendations and repeat business. I'm retired now, but I still give erotic massages to everyone who requests them. I no longer charge for the sessions, so that I can continue to perfect my sexual massage techniques on a wide range of body types. This arousing story by AlanaAllyn almost makes me want to massage everyone I meet to see what develops. This couple really knows how to write stimulating erotica, and I look forward to seeing more of their massage submissions on this web site soon.

"...can I have him all the way, just for a moment, please, pretty please”

That was special. How could he refuse?