by sensuallystricken
I am really enjoying this series. I can't wait for the next chapter. It is well written and believable. Please keep up the good work.
You keep on bombarding us with sweetness of pure love born out of true friendship, how can one do anything but awe at his and demand more. Sure they are kinky and frisky but that's all part of being young and freshly truly in love, plus added excitement does spice the experience. Judging by how their mom endorses them dating I don't think being caught by her parents would be such a bad thing, sure a reprimand of doing it in plain sight might follow but the joy of them being in item might overweigh it all. Damn I can't wait to read more of those two, hopefully the reveal comes soon!
As usual there are a few mistakes here and there, nothing an editor or a second glance can't fix, but it's still a 5* worthy chapter. Plow on my friend!
It's definitely 5* worthy, but one suggestion is to make them a bit longer, but besides that that's it
Just keep them like this, maybe add an accesental pregnancy to add some drama.