by LolaScott
I agree that the spelling is rough in places. But this is a very hot story. I've followed the chapters so far and I really hope there are more to come.
You're writing about one of my favorite themes--a young, innocent girl and a sexually forceful older man.
I just love Lola's stuff. I think she is my favorite. It is so sexy that this is so true and honest. I keep cheaking back to see if she has anything new. I would encourage anyone to read all of her material
I don't under when and why Lisa's father became the bad guy