All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Father Ch. 04'

by LolaScott

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Intense

I agree that the spelling is rough in places. But this is a very hot story. I've followed the chapters so far and I really hope there are more to come.

You're writing about one of my favorite themes--a young, innocent girl and a sexually forceful older man.

musicguy2003musicguy2003about 20 years ago
Lola is the best

I just love Lola's stuff. I think she is my favorite. It is so sexy that this is so true and honest. I keep cheaking back to see if she has anything new. I would encourage anyone to read all of her material

ramonbrookramonbrookover 11 years ago
I like the story, but....

I don't under when and why Lisa's father became the bad guy

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