All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Girl Ch. 02'

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PeterspeterPeterspeteralmost 8 years ago
This is getting good.

Building up really well. Keep it up.

ramonbrookramonbrookalmost 8 years ago
Been here in my life!

Falling for my best friends girl! We were best friends since 3rd grade. Fortunately we all graduated high school and had different agendas. His girl to one college him to another and me to the military. Just grew out of the situation, but it was one of the worst feelings I ever knew!

Love the story and will be looking for more. But what about "The Jogger"?

I hope you haven't given up on that one!

GrobnarGrobnaralmost 8 years ago

Very cerebral. Everything is built up in his head, he's really getting hung up on her. Yet, I suppose that's what first love is.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Very good!

Thank you for sharing this story with us. I can't wait for the next chapter! I would like more interaction between the characters--especially Rachael and Wilson, but that's up to you. ;) Oh and I'm french and I don't really get the "Lube" nickname story... I mean, why from "WD-40" it became "Lube"?

tnhardontnhardonalmost 8 years agoAuthor
RE: Very Good

Glad you are enjoying the story! In the United States, WD-40 is a popular industrial lubricant. Most people would use it to fix a squeaky door or something of that nature.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great build-up

I'm really liking the slow build. My only complaint is that I constantly want to read more! I hope you have more planned and coming soon. I'm excited to see if he gets to slowly see more of her and if his fantasies grow

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
next part

When is the next part coming??

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