All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Mother'

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Formbdy2k2011Formbdy2k2011over 10 years ago

You made this seem like she set this up. No story development just wham bam thank you ma'm sort of thing. Look at other stories on this site and you see some quality.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What's that?

"That was the best sex I have ever had," Janet said. What? In the back of a truck down a country road on a rainy night. You've had a shitty love life woman.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A "muscle" car??

With a back seat??

One big enough for two adults, let alone big enough for those two adults to have sex in??

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
rain on the moon

I've never seen a full moon during a heavy storm. Not bad but needed more story development like already said.

w8ingnoww8ingnowover 10 years ago
Needs work

I enjoyed the story line, but it just wasn't all there. At the very least you can add some chapters to make up for this one's shortfalls.

William smythWilliam smythover 10 years ago
It's not very literary

But it's more than just erotic. It's pure porn.

Hot cock-raising pornography bound to arouse your most prurient thoughts and deeds. And for that it gets a rousing 5 stars from me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great Story

Thank You! Hope more chapters follow soon.

chytownchytownover 10 years ago
Hot SEX!! ****

The must have been a Chevy SS if they were in the back seat. He would need that much room for 9 inches. LOL

rightbankrightbankalmost 10 years ago
I can't wait till

the police car pulls up behind them while they are asleep and puts on the spotlight and top flashers. while of course the dash cam is rolling.

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