All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Mother Ch. 01'

Kinda clunky. One, does he live there? Hanging out at a friends is one thing, he has a room? Also, a woman that shy isnt showing her bra and panties to what she thinks is a friend. It has promise but needs work.

Hope chapter 2 comes quite quickly

He can't afford college but has millions through investing? How does that work lol.

***Thanks for the read.

Good story, keep writing.

It looks as if this has been written by a 14 year old, sorry just to silly

Score -1.