All Comments on 'My Best Friends Older Brother'

by kmj8604

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

SHUDDER not shutter, shutter is a window dressing. What is with all the writers using shutter lately?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
GREAT ! ! !

Congrats on a well told, well paced story.

It was something many of your readers should like, and even possibly relate to.

Thanks for writing and sharing it with us. :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Excellent

Very real story. It happens a lot this way. Good storytelling not just sex.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
great story

This was the best story i have read on literotica!

RossDanielsRossDanielsabout 12 years ago
Very nice

The story had a realistic feel to it that made it very erotic. The sex scenes were smoking hot and also rang very true. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Is there going to be another chapter

Very well written looking forward to reading more

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Loved this story, it needs a sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved this story

Jake could use some sexy chest hair for that muscled chest. Liv is always licking his chest and his nipples, and tracing his treasure trail. It would be great to see him matured and with chest hair -- oh, so sexy on a young man! Please write more about Jake and Liv.

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