by kmj8604
SHUDDER not shutter, shutter is a window dressing. What is with all the writers using shutter lately?
Congrats on a well told, well paced story.
It was something many of your readers should like, and even possibly relate to.
Thanks for writing and sharing it with us. :-)
Very real story. It happens a lot this way. Good storytelling not just sex.
The story had a realistic feel to it that made it very erotic. The sex scenes were smoking hot and also rang very true. Nicely done.
Very well written looking forward to reading more
Jake could use some sexy chest hair for that muscled chest. Liv is always licking his chest and his nipples, and tracing his treasure trail. It would be great to see him matured and with chest hair -- oh, so sexy on a young man! Please write more about Jake and Liv.