by sjalv91
Hated the tone and style of storytelling. Add to that idiotic things like "I'm not a feminist." Ugh. What a slog of a read.
Absolutely loved the story! Sure grammatical errors exist but their chemistry is electric. Can't wait to hear more from them!
I loved the story... Except where she says she's not a feminist.
Feminist just means that you believe men and women are equal.
"I'm not a feminist" is a pretty idiotic thing for anyone, but particularly a character like Kate, to say.
I got tired of having to ADD words where you left them missing in sentences. 1*