by rudeshrew
well most of the readers do not want to be part of your story.... try and keep readers as readers and characters in the story as characters in the story.
I don't normally care for sub men stories...they do nothing for me...but this one did. A little problem with third and first person but otherwise very enjoyable. looking forward to more ...
I disagree with the previous anonymous person. I rather enjoyed being in the story. Matter of preference, I suppose.
Standing in the corner, hands firmly wrapped in heavy nylon cord, wearing nothing but my t-shirt and socks and waiting, waiting for my teacher to come and put me over her large comfortable lap for the lengthy sound bare bottom spanking I so richly deserved, even craved, I heard her heels click as she approached ......
Very well written. My only complaint is there isn't more yet. Looking forward to more if you decide to continue the story. :)