All Comments on 'My Big Brother Ch. 02'

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Playful4BearPlayful4Bearabout 4 years ago
Just beautiful

Once again kudos to you. So hot and beautifully written.

What an amazing story !!!

I wish sincerely I have had that with my baby brother

cdnbimale50cdnbimale50almost 3 years ago

There should be more romance in this, doesn't matter if there brothers or not!

adidas21525adidas215259 months ago

This was absolutely perfect and believable. I literally exploded inside when they kissed- had been hoping for it all this episode and since the last one. I’m in awe of your writing and descriptive power. I love these two together.

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