All Comments on 'My Big Futa Sister Ch. 02'

by DankBulbasaur

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Enjoying the read! Can’t wait to see the siblings love grow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good job

Can't wait for ch3, really have me in suspense here...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

in my opinion, this chapter is a little short. Perhaps more words and more story development would be more appropriate.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

There is going to be sex in your sex story, right?

shybutcurious74shybutcurious74over 5 years ago
Looking forward to chapter 3!

This story is building up nicely. Thank you for your efforts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Good build-up, no action. You also need an editor, my friend. Don’t rush your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good Story

Like the story good buildup between the brother and sister slowly which I hope leads to a long term love relationship as they seem made for each other

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

These stories are giving me blue balls

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Constructive

Take your time keep it the same way you’re going and make Chapter 3 long

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Again great story

Again great story but I would (personaly) wait till I had enough to fill 2 pages on literotica then post it. But great build up love it

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Awesome!

This story so far is fantastic! You're doing great! 😊

DankBulbasaurDankBulbasaurover 5 years agoAuthor
@Anon

Does it show in the preview that if a story is 2 pages long or how would I know for sure?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

This is great so far but I can't wait fir them to be sucking and fucking each other. One bit of criticism though is that the chapters need to be longer, 2 pages just isn't enough

jmkuehnjmkuehnover 5 years ago
Good run going here

I like the story and how you are working it in. I really like that the sister isn't just acting like a teenage guy. While you haven't spelled out if she has a pussy in addition to her member, she is still acting mostly like a girl. That is rare and refreshing in a story like this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More more more

make more more more more more Please :p

Miah_HMiah_Hover 2 years ago

Yessss. Always a fan of the self-sucking futa. I hope her brother gets to enjoy gulping down her big loads soon!

(Side Note: I am aware that this story is nearly 3 years old, but I’m commenting as I go, because I don’t want to read ahead, and yet I have my hopes for where it’s going.)

maxx7839maxx7839about 2 years ago

Love the slow build and the casual nature of the sister sucking herself off, great story!

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