by DankBulbasaur
in my opinion, this chapter is a little short. Perhaps more words and more story development would be more appropriate.
This story is building up nicely. Thank you for your efforts.
Good build-up, no action. You also need an editor, my friend. Don’t rush your stories.
Like the story good buildup between the brother and sister slowly which I hope leads to a long term love relationship as they seem made for each other
Take your time keep it the same way you’re going and make Chapter 3 long
Again great story but I would (personaly) wait till I had enough to fill 2 pages on literotica then post it. But great build up love it
Does it show in the preview that if a story is 2 pages long or how would I know for sure?
This is great so far but I can't wait fir them to be sucking and fucking each other. One bit of criticism though is that the chapters need to be longer, 2 pages just isn't enough
I like the story and how you are working it in. I really like that the sister isn't just acting like a teenage guy. While you haven't spelled out if she has a pussy in addition to her member, she is still acting mostly like a girl. That is rare and refreshing in a story like this.
Yessss. Always a fan of the self-sucking futa. I hope her brother gets to enjoy gulping down her big loads soon!
(Side Note: I am aware that this story is nearly 3 years old, but I’m commenting as I go, because I don’t want to read ahead, and yet I have my hopes for where it’s going.)
Love the slow build and the casual nature of the sister sucking herself off, great story!