All Comments on 'My Big Futa Sister Ch. 05'

When you do get to finishing up, may I suggest some people getting pregnant

I really like the idea of the other anomynous and still love the story can't wait to see where you take it

You switch between present and past tense, sometimes even in the same paragraph. Please pick one tense and stick with it, the story will have a better flow that way.

Is English your native language?

Waiting for the next chapter of this story

When is the next part coming out, great story

I LOVE this and can't wait for the next chapter!

The only thing I can say I don't like is that the story seems rushed, and by that I mean "I penetrated her, she moaned, I came". With just some more filling in between those lines this would be 10/10 in my opinion. (I'm just comparing to hentai I've read tho)

Great work, keep it up!

Can’t wait for the new chapter!

Here are some tips that other people gave me too (im still a noob tho):

Try making it longer than 1 page, (i cant do it either sometimes) as it gives the reader the feeling that it’s even longer

Don’t repeat words or sentences all the time

My upload schedule is totally fucked, so you don’t have to apologize for it the entire time, i think it’s only human. It’s better not to rush and leave the creativity some time.

Ps: i have an idea which i want to share with all the writers in the futa community, which is to have like a groupchat of creators where we can exchange ideas and collab. Of course without sharing personal info, but imagine all the great ideas that would come of that!

Please continue your awesome work!

I hope your not discouraged by the negativity, I really enjoy the story, looking forward to more adventures

Pls make more bro

I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!

Please more chapters. Very hot story. One of the few futa.

Hey everyone, sorry about the huge hiatus regarding this story (I've had a lot going on irl), I am slowly but surely getting Ch 6 done and hopefully by at the very latest it'll be done by the end of the month. I appreciate all the feedback and I'm slowly getting back into this. Thanks again

More Futa sis please!!

Just please finish this, there are far too many unfinished stories on here already.

Rapier

Hopefully this will come to it’s inevitable conclusion with a threesome between Nick and the two Allys which results in girlfriend Ally’s impregnation by sister Allie,

Yours is the first I've read that doesn't come to him being her fuck hole and MAYBE getting a blowjob. Others she pretty much loses his dick and only cum on his, from anal, on his back and probably eats it while continuing to be in pain from "ass splitting". Not to knock others, but it's a guy. He should be allowed to stay a guy. Yours is way better in that he still fucks her and doesn't act like having her inside him is the only pleasure in life. Your difference of style is great. The only things I would fix is slightly more variation in wording, longer chapters and combine them actually. You know, give more details on things they're doing or the environment, like how was the drive or was it bumpy? The appearance of things could also use more detail (that gets boring, but in small amounts it's good filler) like how do their dick, pussies and boobs look? Veiny, smooth, very light, darker, pink, tight or loose. Does he now have a loose hole lol? Last thing, I would have written half as many chapters and made each or longer by writing two of them as one.

Hope that wasn't too much info to absorb or so long it got boring to read

It's a great story can't wait for more chapters

You wrote the last chapter on 1/19/19. It is now 7/19/2021. Where are the following chapters? What you wrote so far is great.

I hope you come back and finish this up

The buildup was awesome but it should've included Allison fucking Nicks tight ass and unloading a bucket of cum in his bowels.It sure would've made their sibling relationship more memorable and loving.

Also they should have added Allyson to the mix,and have Allison and Nick fuck her at the same time and maybe both could get Allyson pregnant by both of them,and raise the baby by all 3 of them.But the story overall was great but needed more details.