All Comments on 'My Big Sister: The Straight Arrow'

That was a great story.

The story was told fairly well, although the sister breaking free of her shackles seems to come out of nowhere and, therefore, lacks some credibility.

"She was grinding into her husband's face like a woman processed as she pinched and pulled on her erect nipples." Obviously, you meant to write "a woman possessed." This is a perfect example of why every author needs an editor.

Thanks for sharing.

I hope you'll continue this great story. Thanks.

I appreciated this story. I really like the length as well, it was just a beat of literature but you really didn't need anymore. And the tale was fun and sexy and intelligent.

Nice job.

great story. well written. believable.

guys don't need 8-12 inch cocks to know how to please a woman. (or two!)

lol I think literotica's favorite editor, Bill Gates, probably snuck in that "processed", but I understand what was meant, and this is an intriguing and erotic story. The gentle taboo-shattering and its threeway consummation is very sensuous, and I enjoy Sharon's mysterious and surprising depths. Very nicely done!

Nicely done.

Good start, could have been a little longer with the sisters doing each other till the husband was ready to do his wife.

I read a lot in Literotica. The way this was written seems it really could have happened even if this was just your imagination getting exercised.

I would have liked to have read what happened next, when the straight arrow sister started to crawl towards her kinky sister, and how the three of them spent the next week.

Abby, that was fantastic. You are going to write a sequel, aren't you? I can hardly wait to find out how things continue

Very nicely put together story, I really enjoyed it.

that was such a hot story. Can't wait for the next part--my pussy is dripping

Great writing, need more.