All Comments on 'My Birthday'

by indykegler

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ErotonautErotonautover 11 years ago
"It is going to be very difficult for anybody to rape me, because I would probably enjoy it more than him."

Sorry, but that remark pretty much sums all I find wrong with this 'erotic coupling'. I'd suggest it should be under 'non-consent', but this woman seems happy for any Tom or Harry to put their Dicks up her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
crap

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Poorly set up.

What if the kids had woken up to see their mom getting "raped"? How traumatizing would that have been for them or for her? Threatening her children is something a real rapist would do; but I can't see her enjoying the experience because she would know that her children are in danger.

My husband and I tried to enact a rape fantasy once, but it didn't work too well. Him taking me when and where is more than erotic enough!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Maybe

you've been hit by a bowling ball or one of the pins!

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 11 years ago
Men should not write rape fantasies....

...from the woman's pov because woman do not like rape. Get it? Nothing erotic here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

So a WACC husband sets up his wife to be fucked by two rapists for her birthday. While the kids are still in the house. You are mentally ill if you think this is erotic. Don't write anymore pathetic WACC stories.

indykeglerindykeglerover 11 years agoAuthor
Sorry about this...

This story line was given to me by a friend of fantasy of hers. I will ask it be removed. Any offense to any and all I as very sorry

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
People, please

It's a fantasy. Get over yourselves. If you don't like this type of material, go somewhere else. And yes, some women do have rape fantasies. As do some men (fantasize about being raped).

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 11 years ago
Yes anonymous, many mentally ill people also have fantasies....

...that doesn't mean the real thing would be welcome nor does it detract from the fact that this is abhorrent, non-erotic and depraved. I fantasize about killing 99% of mankind. So would it be erotic if I posted that?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
re: People, please

Just because something is a fantasy does NOT make it immune from criticism. Unless you have never read a story, watched a movie or TV show without making a negative comment, without thinking the story was trash, your comment makes no sense and is hypocritical.

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