All Comments on 'My Birthday Gift'

by RolandHill

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More please!

Great start! What happens next? ;)

LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleover 11 years ago
OMG!

You can't stop there!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
keep going

i want to see more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
mr awesome

WHAT!? SERIOUSLY? YOU CAN'T STOP THE STORY THERE!!!

MistressCarrieMistressCarrieover 11 years ago
Incomplete

Nice lead in but then it was as if you didn't know where to go with the story so you just quit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Arg! What a tease! Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

more please cant wait for next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
MORE!!

So goooood ! I wanna know what happens with them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
what!?

Why would you do this to me!? It was getting so good! Fml.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
argg

What the hell you can't just leave it off there you must make more.

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