by RolandHill
Great start! What happens next? ;)
You can't stop there!!!
i want to see more please
WHAT!? SERIOUSLY? YOU CAN'T STOP THE STORY THERE!!!
Nice lead in but then it was as if you didn't know where to go with the story so you just quit.
Arg! What a tease! Keep going!
more please cant wait for next chapter
So goooood ! I wanna know what happens with them!
Why would you do this to me!? It was getting so good! Fml.
What the hell you can't just leave it off there you must make more.