by JocastaFarthingale
Great start as I am reading from the 3rd story to the start. Very hot and will get them both off if they continue. Cannot wait for chapter 2 then the next step after chapter 3. All excellent, thank you.
Very well written fantasy. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Keep up the great writing.
Fantastic story, i can't wait to read what happens next.
It got me horny as hell and reminded me of a simialr experience driving along the M4.
very good story, nice build up though the first person narration was a bit poor
Great story, nice detail and build up, can't wait for the next part, but don't lose the detail by trying to rush the second part.