All Comments on 'My Birthday Present'

by Taegul

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Lookin4nufunLookin4nufunover 8 years ago
OMG

If after 12 years of not riding this is your first story. Lord. I can't wait to read the rest of them. Absolutely fabulous with detail and filled with emotion. Great story

NOIRTRASHNOIRTRASHover 8 years ago
I'm a tough critic

3 starz.

Better stories are common but this one is coherent and cohesive enough. Its okay but I wouldn't pick it up for a quickie or one night stand. Read plenty of better stories and try again.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Only one question Who else is the wife cheating with?

Way, way to comfortable for this to be new, no she is cheating everyday of the week

this was his almost bone, bet those photos are used for black mail or humiliation

time to kick her ass out

thebuffalothebuffaloover 8 years ago

Good job. You deserve 5 stars and that's the way it is.

By the way, anonymous, if it is consensual and open it ain't cheating

TaegulTaegulover 8 years agoAuthor
I'm confused

There is no 'wife' in this story and no issue of cheating or consent. Are comments being put to the wrong story somehow? Anonymous' comment certainly seemed to be for a completely different story. Am I missing something?

LadyIrisLadyIrisabout 7 years ago
5 stars

It was well written, the story just flowed.

That's the way to celebrate a birthday

desire30desire30about 1 year ago

giggle what a good wife ;; i would love to be Nikki

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

This story SUCKS!!

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