All Comments on 'My Birthday Surprise'

A very sexy story with great elements!

As always, more please?

Hot scenario and moderately well written, but the typos and misspelling detract from the building intensity of your prose. Suggest you proof read or use an editor.

Hot story. More please!

That was hot and totally unexpected. Excellent work.

Thanks for the comments and feedback :)

Loved the setup and the interplay between all four. The interplay between all parties was intense. Loved how the wife got everyone going and the husband just sort of played along. A birthday he'll never forget.

Always been a big fan of the double dick in pussy sex! A buddy of mine, his girlfriend and I made sure that was the way we got off at least once like that every time the 3 of us hooked up over a period of 4 years.

Super hot!