All Comments on 'My Bitch Sister'

It was really good writing, do you plan to write more on this story?

speaking as person with a bitchy sister- I'm rooting for narrator. The parallels stop there because she's attractive only if you prefer the BBW phylum of femininity. I don't. So that's probably a win/win for both of us.

A good story, but I don't think he has enacted enough revenge on his sister yet.

I think he should knock the bitch up while she's passed out, and she wouldn't know who the father of her baby would be.

That might change her life style for a while.

Thanks for the read.

Good start to the story but I don't think he has really gotten his revenge yet just coming on her face isn't that bad with the way he was talking about her ass you would think that he would have taken advantage of her and fucked her up the ass and taken pictures.

she deserves more...turn her out...

man those are some urges but if i watned to get abitch sister back lie that id wait for anight where the rents were out. have some big black guy with a huge dick come over and bang the shit outta her till she passes out.. and i mean make the bitch scream cause it hurts banging her.

thats somthing you can video and embarass her with!

after she retaliates he should wait til she's really drunk (perhaps while the folks are away on a trip?), tie her up, wait til she sobers up, get a camera ready, stick a ball gag in her mouth and fuck the living hell out of all her holes, smack her ass with a paddle, the works.

then he can threaten to post it on the internet if she doesn't obey his every fucking whim, including helping him fuck that bitch best friend of hers. he should own both bitches, and humiliate the fuck out of them.

that'd do it for me mwhahahahaa

A good, well written story. The pacing was excellent. It is the type of story, however, that seems unfinished. No particular suggestions, it's your story, just think it needs a finish. I voted highly for it. I think it's good.

Please continue!!! Great story!!!

yes pls finsh this story

Let's see what happens next because there has to be a next. Coming on her tits isn't enough of a payback. Looking forward to see what happens to the bitch. lol.

Thanks guys!

I do plan on adding more to the story...don't worry, he's not done yet. Dave and his sister both get meaner, and the end of the first chapter is foreshadowing a bit of other interaction...

Stay tuned; I'll get around to adding more chapters when I can.

Hope you are going to soon post part 2 :)

You need to finish ( or at least another chapter ) the story!!! It's intriguing!!! MORE,MORE,MORE!!!

deffinatly rape sex with someone so drunk they don't know what they are doing or passed out is by law rape therefore this belongs in the nonconsent/reluctance area thats why they have seperate areas use them wisely

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kind of short and not much on the details the brother did not even sleep with her or record her well it has a good start