All Comments on 'My Black Sheep Ch. 02'

Somehow, when I was submitting this, I fucked up copying and pasting and left off the author's note stating that this story is a collaboration with maria_mcgeorge. Votes and favorites are appreciated. Comments are adored.

You are building a great story. Can’t wait for more

Absolutely relatable and utterly incomprehensible at the same time. I wasn’t as terrified by this as the first part, even though it turned out I really had no idea what was coming - I thought maybe something similar than part 1, but oh boy, this was not like that.

I really liked the ending.

I didn't understand a thing.

Very powerful, coherent writing, and storing plot. The action is much much too strong/extreme for my taste... But it's made effective and meaningful by the quality of the writing.

I love your prose and adore your characters. Thanks for another terrific read.

You have done an incredible job of depicting an emotional intensity I am not sure my system is capable of comprehending but it is absolutely masterful.