All Comments on 'My Blue Pill with Green Eyes Ch. 01'

But the start was really unrealistic, what with her being so forward and attached to him... It kinda tempted me into skipping the story. Curious to see what you make of it.

I like it so far, i wonder how your going to keep te story going, i wonder wha his daughter is going to make about all this

Redheads have always been my dream girls and this one is a ruby-fied sweetheart. Great read and please, 'keep writing'!

Really enjoyed reading them and felt good at the end of each one...long or short !!

I am looking forward to reading more and hopefully, some extensions please !!

Rick

Your characters breathe, your story flows like a smooth old river. Your writing style and mechanics of English made for an easy read. I see you have posted quite a few stories here and I hope to see many more. Thank you for sharing your work!

Enjoyed it so far.

I liked that it is a respectful, loving relationship (could be in Romance) without the crude language of some stories.

As to hair color, red is not so attractive to me -- pretty much at the bottom of choices. I guess if we all liked the same things, we would all want you the same woman and be driving the same car. And that would be boring.

Paul in Oklahoma

I don't know what to say, I both envy and hate Gary. I am 70 years old and it has been way way to long since I have been even held by loving arms. I wish I could say something Sage and Wise but words escape me.

Great, very hot, well written story. No typos or grammatical errors to speak of. Good plot, believable, heart warming.

Now this was a well written love story with great character development. The slow buildup in their relationship just added to the deep warm loving relationship these two are developing. I can't wait to continue this love story and watch it develop and grow in the next chapter. This is one of the best love stories I have read here on Lit in a long time. Well done 5+++++++++++stars