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by JeffreyFreemont

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JeffreyFreemontJeffreyFreemontover 11 years agoAuthor
I admit...

This wasn't my best chapter. I decided to change the feel of my story and this was a chapter I experienced a great deal of writer's block around while I figured out how to do that. The next chapter while not perfect is an improvement. The writing I am most proud of is still to come though

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Childish....

Needs more....is kind of childish.

Add some more detail.

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