All Comments on 'My Boss Ch. 04-06'

quit while your ahead! This story is trash and just getting worse as it goes along.

This story is not erotic just drawn out possibilities about a guy and his girlfriend. No loving wives or sex. Girlfriend lies to him and he’s scared to open his mouth. Not a man, he can’t even talk to girlfriend. What is this a gay guy jealous she getting his boss that he wants?

Nothing here for anyone I can find. I give up on this junk

and end it now. It's just plain boring. Every character is pathetic...who cares what happens to any of them?

Go ahead and put up with your boss and Sandra and their lying and deceipt. Let the wedding continue and make a promise that both of you will say your own vows. She will say hers first, it is customary, and then tell her that she is a lying cheating slut and you will not marry her and say it loud enough for the pastor, wedding party to hear and have it taped and then tell her NO Way could could not marry a creature like her and throw her ass in the street and humiliate her as much as you can. Get a voice activated recorder and tape all of Jason's conversations to you about Sandra and submit then to Human Resources and file a sexual harassment suit against the company naming Jason as the party that broke up your forthcoming marriage.

One other thing, the tape that you make at the wedding, send a copy to her parents, friends and her employer. You might even want someone to post it on the internet and make some money. Surely she is worth something.

I had hoped this story was going to take a turn for the better but I guess not. I'd suggest you shoot yourself but I'm sure you're not MAN enough to do that either. Awaiting the rest of this tale. NOT!!!!!!!!

If this is intended as being anything other than a basic cuckold without even an objection being raised then go right ahead and continue the degradation of a relationship.

Jason is presented as the ultimate alpha male, so regardless, the poor unfortunate needs to immediately concede and leave her gear on the porch while she moves in with Jason and bear the humiliation or stand and fight for what was originally presented as a valid and stable relationship. Jason would be less impressive with a bat or a 22 slug behind one or both knees

Keep up the great work!

stop her by either telling her you know or meeting them and sucking his cokc. But stop writing this stop your sad and a wimp[!

The most stupid story line I've read yet. You must be as stupid as the boyfriend in your story if you think this is interesting. You're just filling up time and space with inane ideas that are not worth the time to read. This episode ended it for me. Keep playing... others are serious writers.

the worried story i look at,because you can't believe it's real.

Garbage repackaged as tripe.

Sorry but this story has to be one of the worst I've run into in the "Loving Wifes" catagory. The girlfriend/fiancee openly doesn't care about her fiancee and is looking to cheat and the stupid boyfriend doesn't say a word? Come on. Why would he be with her at all, and why is she sticking around? She's got a job so it can't be money, and its definitely not for sex. So please, have the boyfriend put a bullet into his own head since he's a complete waste of life.

What everyone else has sait about your crappy story goes double for me. You are one sick guy

I think this is one of the best stories I've ever read, and I'm anxious to find out what happpens when Jason takes her our on a date. Obviously, Jason is going to catch up with those five college guys, and we're going to find out how willing she is. I hope she "chickens out" when she sees the five college guys, and the third chapter of the story ends up in non-consent classification. That would be hot!

This is, without doubt, the worst, most unbeleivable, story I have ever read. John is such a wimp, the only fitting thing would be for a taped gang bang at the Friday night party,and, then arranging to play the tape at their wedding. She comes in topless and he pretends to be asleep; rather than confront her. What a fucking wimp.

happen. You're a wimp and don't deserve any woman. So why not walk away now and let the phony big dick man have her and save us all the humiliatyion. He's going to fuck her anyway if you don't do something. It might be to late now if she sucked his cock you're done. You should cut your losses and your throat. Becasue once he fucks her everyone you work with is going to know it. If she sucked him off everyone knows it too. Stand up, talk1!!! At least talk you fuck bubble. You are a sorry ass wimp! Be a man and claim her forbid her stand up for your woman and yourself for God sake!

excellent !

keep up the good work.

the best thing to do for this unmarried wimp who gets turned on by the guys in beach wear, is to find hi one of the guys. Why he would want to marry or even stay with a slut (who goes after anything in pants) is something I am still trying ot figure out. Why his girl would not only wear intimate babydolls but tell his boss details of who picked them out is a stroy lead.

Your best way to improve this story is to end it now.

To have lived it allows jackie john to write about how helplessly and pathetically humiliated he wimpily felt.

Make no mistake, jackie john will be sucking big cock at her request before chapter 75-76-77! It is a wimpy but driving need high on the gayly backside.

One wonders why jackie john spends this much time writing for the few sicko's who need a helpless pathetic humiliation just to rev up the jaded subhuman feelings.

Wheres the beef jackie john? Do you really need this wimpet humiliation that strongly??? Has someone kicked some sand in your face jackie john? Talk to your friend/wife - tell her you wished she wouldn't do that again unless she wants to - you know - take a stand little sick wimpet soon to be a watching cuckster.

But then why not jackie john, if it you makes you feel more like a little boy fluffer in need of an apron go for it suckily?

another girlfriend another job another place to live ...why stay with a cheating bitch ..and who wants a fucked up boss either dont resign just walk out call in sick while you move out... on

Ok story, but its time for the revenge part... most men would not take a wife or girlfriend cheating like this with his boss... There would be all kind of problems it work .. time to kick out the women and turn the boss in and move on

This is an awesome story.

whens the net installment coming

This little wimp needs to kick her ass out with nothing. Then tell his boss to piss up a rope.

She needs to make it official and take complete control.

Finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please

This is brilliant teasing at it's best, and I could read another 10 chapters of it... given two things - more confrontation and perhaps some real physical evidence. Like maybe a polaroid, a cum stained bikini top, etc.?

that was great, I wish there was more

Are a joke, just suck your own cocks and quit hiding behind women.

Of course he is a wimp, that is the point. This is a brilliant story – the enjoyment of the humiliation, the inability to confront Sandra, the arrogance of the Jason character, Sandra’s willingness to deceive and hide, the way she teases, the main character's confusion … these all ring true and are very, very hot. I am happy to wait for this to play out. The waiting is part of the fun. Please write on.

By a faggot writer.

Such a pity you didn't finish this one. it seems to me you needed to take it to the next level. If you still log on you really need to finish this one. just the number of comments must be rewarding in itself, even the dickheads that no doubt vote you down. Seems to me that they're the sad ones, reading stuff they don't even like and then taking the time to comment on it. That is sad, what a pathetic existence they must lead torturing themselves in that manner. Give them what they want and keep it going, they seem to love tormenting themselves, lol.

Jack:

I have enjoyed both these stories, You have left this story line open for more chapters.

I would like it if you would continue writing.

Loved it, can't wait for more, thank you.

I still wish that you would continue this story. Several directions this story could follow and I would love to see what you choose. It appears that it has been a while since the last submission but I still hold out hope

Like the story so far. Great setup, would be great to see what happens next.

time to continue this story........ take her to the party- make a video....... do the payshots.......... and a post shooting group session with the photographer....... then take her back to the beach for more photos.... and nail her in the water.

never have her admit anything let the boss fill in the details with photos and videos and a new baby bump in a month or so

sack up and do it bro!!

His new girlfriends name? Since he dropped Sandra the Slut.

This loser author warns about sex, but no warning it was a loser cuck wimp story.....

Cuckold story could have been much better if he had acted like a man rather than a wimp. I could be much better. Would like to rewrite it.

Q: is Sandra a keeper or John should break up with her ASAP?

The story is very very EROTIC.

In my opunion you are wrong if you think this story is not realistic. IT IS REALISTIC. In real world, all of this could happen, & would happen, but the sequence of events could be different. This 2-part series is like a stage play: in Act 1 we learn a lot about characters, & in Act 2 the improbable becomes the order of the day; in the last scene of Act 2 each character as a rule accepts his or her destiny.

Sandra is an exhibitionist and a slut.

John is a voyeur/cuck boyfriend.

Jason is an ass.

Hi everybody!

Question: Is SANDRA a KEEPER? 'YES' or 'NO'?

Just a run of the mill cuckold story, nothing more. Glad you took the advice and killed it.

Re anon 09/12/18 'ALL THREE PAGES...' - Yes, Sandra is a keeper! Totally!

Sandra's boyfriend loves her truly, madly, deeply, selflessly, unconditionally, & (YES!) he kind of loves her too much. But, that's life!

Her boyfriend will stay with her. Some men (including yours truly) tend to fall in love with women who will stray when they have a chance. If the guy is her boyfriend's boss (or her own boss, for that matter) she will agressively flirt with him from the get-go!

👍👍

Horrible gf character.

5*****

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John, the narrator, is a complex character. He is already aware he has a strong voyeur side. He has a wannabe-cuckold side too, but he is not fully aware of that as yet. He knows that Sandra is out of his league.

John has a hard time standing up to Jason, whose words & behavior are totally out of line.

I am telling the following based on my own experience:

In my opinion the problem that John faces is that he is not aware of his kinky desire to share his wife. To a lesser extent the same goes for his voyeur side. Feelings, impulses & thoughts of that kind are stored in the most hidden corner of his psyche. In situations similar to those John is experiencing, the hidden hitherto-suppressed kinky side of one's personality manages to override his or her better judgement. That person is temporarily paralysed, unable to act; his mind becomes foggy, he is in a hypnotic trance of sorts. After the fact the same person does not confront his girlfriend over what happened, what she was doing. She plays dumb. The same guy behaves like it never happened. He convinces himself it was a one-off incident which was totally out of character. (Yeah right!)

Jason is an arrogant prick.

Sandra will be a hot wife. She will stay with John provided he expressly or tacitly gives her a hall pass.

Please continue the story! TY

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👍👍!

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I agree with anon comment submitted around Jul 2020:

Sandra will be a hot wife. She will stay with John provided he expressly or tacitly gives her a hall pass."

Loved it (❤): ☆☆☆☆☆ (five stars)! This series is a tour de force!

When your boss is fucking your consenting wife and you like it, that is the epitome of kinky.

But it is not the end of the world! It is the beginning of something new.

Sandra is fun to be with. She has the hots for John's boss. She is not doing anything behind john's back. Sandra is a keeper. Period.

Ch 2 of this series was brilliantly conceived and masterfully crafted.

It goes without saying that Sandra is a keeper. Period.

Love it! 💚💚💚💚💚- [5- (4.6 of 5)]! Kinky!

I do not envy John. He likes and loves Sandra very much. He realizes he may end up sharinng her with Jason.

What doesn't kill John will make him stronger.

Love this story, gave you a 5 (★★★★★)!

I am copy pasting an older comment:

"Anonymous 2 months ago

Loved it (❤): ☆☆☆☆☆ (five stars)!

This series is a tour de force!"

In my book this series is excellent: very very erotic, and true to life.

👍👍!

👍👍!

you don't deserve constructive comments for this piece of shit. wrong category you moron

Really LOVE it! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐+

[5+ (5.25 = 105% "above expectations")]!

Sandra is perfect hotwife material.

Re Anonymous 6 days ago

he said you posted the story in wrong category

THIS IS A 'LOVING WIFE' STORY. it was posted in the right category.

Excerpt from page 2 of the story follows.

Immediately upon her return I just had to ask her.

"Oh yea, of course I did!" She answered in a tone of mock amusement and an obvious joke. "We walked about a mile up the beach, and I had my top off the whole time!"

She shook her head and smiled at me.

"Come in John! Can you picture me walking down a topless beach?"

This is a 5+ story: ★★★★★ (5.25 = 105%, "above expectations")!

John has a prominent voyeur/cuck-wannabe side, and personality traits of a submissive man. He most probably is not aware of all of that as yet.

We Humans tend to hide from ourselves things we would be ashamed of. So John has first to become aware of his other side; only then can he gradually come to terms with the fact Sandra isn't 'a one man's woman.'

EXCERPT from page 1, Ch. 04 - 06:

"Two things worried me about the beach party. Jason was one. My girlfriend was the other."

I hope this finds you well, and I hope that after years of waiting we will someday find more chapters to this story. Thanks for what you have created, this is one of the best.

My Boss series is a TOUR DE FORCE!

It is very erotic without being pornographic; definitely true to life too.

In my book, the series is a MUST READ.

Sandra is already cheating on her fiancé, John.

Some men love wives who flirt and have sex with other men.

John is a one-woman's husband, unlike Sandra who can not be a one-man's wife.

Excerpt from page 3 of this part:

"... It always amazed me how women would allow a man such as Jason to take a picture of her without a top or sometimes even in the nude. Their defenses seemed to capitulate with the sight of his big cock, and then I started to wonder if Sandra might have done the same. I had no doubt he would try to use the camera on her, but I wasn't so sure if she would allow him."

Bravo, JackBro!

The storyline was intelligently conceived and masterfully crafted.

You totally nailed John's inner dialogue.

Excerpt from the story (SPOILER ALERT!).

Quote:

I quickly woke fully. "What the hell happened to her top?" I asked myself. She walked in through the front door wearing absolutely nothing above the waist. Sandra walked in topless and with her big tits on full display.

Or did she?

A second later I felt doubt. It was dark. The television screen gave an eerie glow and made the lights dance. And I was, after all, only half awake. Not anymore, but certainly half-asleep when she walked in. Did I dream it or did she really walk in without a top?

End quote.

★★★★★ (5.0)

JackBro's My Boss series is my kind of wife/fiancée sex stories. I gave each of the 2 stories a 5+ (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟+)

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Excerpt from the story:

"I sat in shock. It looked like Sandra no longer wore a top. I couldn't be sure because only her back lay exposed and she stood a long distance out into the water, but I was pretty sure. I should have seen the rear strap of her bikini by now! I should have especially seen it in the troughs of the waves, but Sandra appeared to be topless on the other side!

"As I stood frozen with shock, I imagined what Jason was able to see on the other side: Her bare tits, exposed to his gaze..."

Love ❤ it: 5.0 = 100%, ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐!

John's stream of consciousness was used very skillfully. His brain still cannot accept the fact that Jason has already fucked Sandra. If he hasn't that was due to time constraints or something similar. What is sure, he played with her boobs.

Yet in my book Sandra remains a keeper!

Trans writer… gay boi living out his cum eating famtasies

My kind of fiancée sx story, gave you a

5+ (5.5 = 110%, ☆☆☆☆☆+)

Sandra is a keeper but you will have to gove her a hall pass from time to time if you want her to stay with you.

Loved the series: ❤💚❤💚❤ (5.0)! Very very erotic.

John's mind is not ready to accept the fact Sandra is heaving a fling with Jason, but the reality will inevitably sink in.

★★★★★ (5) A tour de force! Very very erotic and totally realistic!

Part 2 of My Boss series is even better than part one.

A MUST READ too.

Excerpt from Part 2:

Quote: "She was gone when I got home. She was still gone when the news ended. From five to eleven-thirty; no, it had to be even later than that. I don't know how late, but it added up to over 7 hours. Maybe an hour to drive to the studio, maybe another hour back; that still meant 5 hours of picture taking. How many pictures could he take in 5 hours? Hundreds, certainly; perhaps thousands."

End quote.

Excerpt from part two of this story.

Quote:

"You look like you need to cool off again with another swim," He took a long look down at her.

"That sounds like fun!" Sandra predictably agreed.

"And I could use another titty feel," He whispered in Sandra's ear just loud enough for me to hear. She blushed, and I pretended not to hear. The sight of her blush made me suspect that he really had felt up her tits earlier.

"That is," He then added. "Provided John doesn't object."

End quote.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐- [5- (4.6 = 92%)]!

Very erotic. Totally realistic.

Sandra is a keeper. Period. End of story.

Hot!

❤💚❤💚❤ (5.0!)

Very very well written.

Erotic and true to life, two in one.

Lol. It's like the author and the "true to life" "totally realistic" etc commenters are all in middle school and never actually met a real, live woman.

I LOVE (❤) husband's boss fucks wife stories. I gave this series a 5.0 (★★★★★).

Sandra is a keeper. Full stop. End of story.

I am copy pasting another user comment:

"tazsis1 - over 11 years ago

Waiting for the wimp

Of course he is a wimp, that is the point. This is a brilliant story – the enjoyment of the humiliation, the inability to confront Sandra, the arrogance of the Jason character, Sandra’s willingness to deceive and hide, the way she teases, the main character's confusion … these all ring true and are very, very hot. I am happy to wait for this to play out. The waiting is part of the fun. Please write on."

🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 (5!)

The little cuck girls are wetting their pants and putting their little colored emojis all over this trash.

LOVE it. Gave u a 5.0 = 💯% (❤💛💚💙💜!)

Two things worried him about the beach party. Jason was one. His girlfriend was the other.

Excerpt from this story:

Quote:

"You never told me he was such a hunk!" Sandra whispered as soon as Jason and his latest girlfriend walked out of earshot.

End quote.

5.0 = 💯% (🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟), ❤❤!

This story was brilliantly conceived and masterfully crafted. It is hot as fuck!

♡♡♡♡♡- (5-)

I'm copy pasting someone else's comment:

"Anon - 3 months ago

Two things worried him about the beach party. Jason was one. His girlfriend was the other."

Bravissimo! This story was very intelligently and imaginatively conceived and brilliantly crafted: ☆☆☆☆☆ (5.0).

John has a strong voyeur side, as well as a wife sharing fetish. He feels that the flirting and cheating Sandra turns him on so much more than the goody goody one. However he is not ready to come to terms with the fact he is a cuckold.

Your rendition of what goes on in a cheated husband's mind is true to life, you nailed it!

The story is a tour de force.