All Comments on 'My Bosses Pt. 01'

I lost track of the grammar and punctuation errors. Trying to think, her neatly trimmed cunt that was still hairy? Just one of so many errors, please find an editor.

Punctuation and grammar suck. Needs an editor. English not your first language?

This was a sexy and fun little romp of a story. Thanks for posting it.

5 Stars. Loved it, can't wait for more. Thank you.

Hot 1 pager - just not crazy about the fiancé mention.

Great 1st story - keep writing! Would love to read more from you!

Good story. Well done!

Great story just one comment. You seem to be missing a lot of spacing between words.

Good story . She likes her first job .

Terrible writing for portraying a secretary. I wish she would have ate some pussy along with learning to fuck her boss.

A nice stroke story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Very nice! Looking forward to reading more of your stories.

If this were a fantasy story, I might comment on spelling, punctuation and such. But the purpose of this story is to tell us what happened. Therefore the raw, unedited version is best.

Loved the last sentence. Carol's thumbs up in the main office tells everybody that this slut is free for all to fuck. I hope that's exactly what will happen in the second part.