All Comments on 'My Boyfriend'

You are a good writer. Although the narrative is typical of its type, you describe the sex itself and the narrator's ego quite well. But the tone between thoughts and words seem to switch back and forth. Enjoyed the read overall

I enjoyed your story, but maybe you could have provided some background as to how their relationship lead to that point

Hot story.

I looked for the real couple to get up together and have some fun..then it wilted. I hate this.

Great work. Really hot short story. Encapsulated the relationship (and the couples different status) very well. Hope you have more stories planned.

Hot story and truly tormenting...love it!! Keep up the great writing.

I’ll never understand how people could be into something this gross. I mean what’s next he gets excited about her sleeping with the neighbors dog? Bleh. She probably would too.