All Comments on 'My Broken China Doll'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Wonderful

This is the greatest fantasy ever. God, I got so hot thinking about Emma licking her teacher's sweet little cunt. Hopefully there'll be a sequel? My cock is itching for it! Keep writing, Onlyshadow!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Excellent

You can't write a sequel to this story without destroying it.

littlelucyjanelittlelucyjaneabout 13 years ago

Really liked it but would have been better if there's a second part where they get it on consentually.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Good Story Quote not correct

Liked the story and the quote is nice but the quoted words belong to Leonard Cohen. John Cale, and a thousand others, have sang those words. Many other songs by Leonard Cohen would be appropriate for many stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Bullshit

No matter what the karate code is no one who could stop a rape would. Beating the shit out of someone is better than letting her get raped and then killing someone. You must like the idea of watching someone getting beat and raped.

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