All Comments on 'My Brother-in-Law Comes Back'

This is devoid of any plot.

Plot is overrated. Sexual encounter well written: what's to dislike?

Meena can use toe sucking to a great advantage. Needs to take control and get what she wants.

EROTIC. A comment indicated the story has no plot but it is not true. Meena86 should have called it Ch. 2. The title is My Brother-in-Law Comes Back which implies SOMETHING was going on beforehand.

Meena86,

Your literary talent is obvious. You managed to write erotic stories by using the vocabulary suitable for day-time TV. In my mind you hit the nail on the head by shifting the focus on arousal from the intercourse itself. When people want each other, a non-material fluid will engulf them and temporarily move them to another world where only the 2 of them exist. I felt that Meena & Raj where for a short while in that non-material parallel universe. People like Meena & Raj can seemlessly hop back & forth between 2 narratives. Having said all of this, i liked how you depicted the intercourse itself, you just put it in the right context.

Highly erotic.

Great story! Very hot..More, More!