All Comments on 'My Brother Loves Me'

A very good start!

Loved it, a bit short but sexy in just the right way. Please write more of these two and hopefully a full blown romance keeps them together

Liked it. Hot fucking her bare and cuming in her pussy. Will look up author's other stories.

Sweet - I like the change

This needs a part two

5 Stars. Please continue with these two at home.

Inceste cool, il devra la marteler un jour et cum face tits

I want more in this story line

Well... I was reading your story with a raging hard on... how about continuing this story. I also had a similar thing with my older sister... I still think of it. She broke it off because our parents and family, they wouldn't not accept this and I had not gotten my engineering degree. So I could afford to get my own place. A year later I had a great job and I was on the way up

But she was too impatient and she got married to the first asshole she found... just to get away from our mother and dad. So I still fantasize on where we would be right now..... thanks fir reading.

You have something to work with here. Let's hear some more.

Please write another chapter about John -- and since he's the older brother, give him a splash of sex chest hair for his young masculine chest. He is a real gentleman and gentle man with his sister!

Thanks for the positive feedback; I'm glad that people are enjoying it.

I'd love to write another chapter, though I'm not sure where to take it. I think a lot of what makes a story good is discovery - discovering another person (sexually or romantically or both) discovering a new kink, etc. An ongoing affair can lack dramatic tension. But given the requests, I'll give it a try. I do have some ideas. I'm also considering have the next chapter narrated by John. Thoughts?

I also wish that I had made the story a little longer, with more description (of both Siblings) and more build up. I'll try to remedy those defects in the next chapter.

Really enjoyed this story. Would like another chapter or two.

More please. I'm thinking it was here brothers first time. True or not?

A hot story especially where she wasn't on birth control

Please do not start switching POV's... just write in the third person... like any normal author would outside of online amateur sites.

I would have liked to have heard more description about genitals. How long and thick he was and how hairy (not slick) her pussy was, cunt lip size and clit size and erect out from under its hood or not. I still gave it a 5 rating.