by chocolatecookie3
Look out Eric Jerome and Zane...you have some impressive company. Love the descriptiveness and flow of the story. Please keep up the good work and hope to read more in the future.
That stupid and false statement about black people looking alike was uncalled for
men belong to a fraternity; women belong to sororities. if you're going to write with college situations, at least know the language.
I don't know how I missed this story .I liked it a lot. I would love to read more.
I found it well written and erotic - a good job of building the anticipation and it had a nice narrative flow.
way to rushed no background and an unrealistic rush to sex. wheres the character build up? wheres the plot build up? wheres the end?
I hope you continue this. It's a really good story line and you tell it well.5+