All Comments on 'My Brother's Massage'

Hot read....short, but it did nt feel rushed...a sequel would be great!!

Not a whole lot of character development since the story was so short.

I assume that you plan a 2nd chapter?

Excellent. Please continue. I am hard thank you.

Very short but also very sexy. Keep them coming!!!

It is so hard to write a good short story. There are just a couple of small punctuation things. (I've wondered if rhetorical questions need punctuation?) You did a great job with your first posting. It is a great story and I am looking forward to more!

I think the story was great. Keep writing, Meliss97.

Very good first story! Can't wait for more.

I love brother and sister stories.

Well written and very erotic. Had me hard and horny.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.

You have my panties wet through most of the story, I needed to stop to give myself a release

Great story. Another part please

Thank you. I enjoyed that.

Great story... Love your stories

A virgin at 24 years old? Ha ha wtf

Nice work. Simple and quick

Loved it….so exciting….