by DarkkBrothaOne
Forgot to add folks, if you don't read/speak Spanish, Google Translate is your friend! Please enjoy and comment!
Minor Point: Navy and Marine Stations have Navy Exchanges and Marine Corps Exchanges, not PX's (Post Exchange). Those are Army. Also, foodstuffs are sold at the base commissary, not at the Exchange.
Great Love story! Love of Brothers, then the love of the woman they both fell for. Five stars! Semper Fi.
that you had picked a 'tense' - first person, third person, present tense, past tense, whatever - and stuck to it!
You do need n editor for occasional spelling nd words but quite enjoyable story, thanks.
Simple but enjoyable read, couldn't find any reason for it to be in Incest/Taboo though. People marrying their brother or sister in law is accepted by all but the most narrow minded idiots. Even prominent Government leaders have done so in modern civilized countries in recent history.