All Comments on 'My Brother's Wife'

a story about a whore that knows zilch about weapons teaching kid??? with an illegal weapon no less!!! second chapter should be about ten years of sex in prison...

Not my thing in SO many ways. I'll pass on this one to the younger more liberal crowd. Have a good one, bye.

It's a story about a grown man WHO DOES know guns teaching ADULTS about them. You clearly didn't read the story at all.

What illegal weapon?

This story is a hedonistic libertines dream story if ever there was one!!! There are so many possibilities here. Please let this be just the beginning of a very long series full of all the sexual deprivation you can think of. And if you need some more ideas I’d be glad to share some thoughts. LOL

This is shaping up to be your best ever!! I’d give ten stars if I could.

Your literary friend and admirer,

Brokenlance

Definately needs another chapter!

Is that all?